April 11, 2010
Dear Silly Writers,
We have time for one more story before Spring Break. I can see that your imaginations are alive and humming!
Now, for this story, please:
1) capitalize your titles and all names.
2) make sure your sentences make sense (have a subject and a verb).
3) once you've written it, try to rework your story and your sentences so it all make more sense as a story. Olivia did this in her last post. Take a look at it.
4) have fun!
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The Wacky, Weird Performance!
ReplyDeleteBy Jessica
I auditioned for a performance that I created myself. I got engaged, and entranced the crowd on stage. Before the show, I had to get all the essentials I would need, like make-up and a traditional costume. The play is about the foremost trio of dancers that take a world tour to Bermuda. They took their private jet, which their grandmother it. So it makes them very sentimental. They were recognized on their tour, but they didn’t forsake their fans. Instead they eliminated any bad feelings at the source and elevated their status even further.
It was an exciting play, so we all had fun.
The End
A Story of Doodle the Rooster
ReplyDeleteBy Paige
One day Doodle the Rooster was walking around in the chicken coop. He was a little confused because he saw a raccoon eating a noodle in the garden. All of a sudden, there was a scream from behind him! Doodle turned around to see a cougar! The weird thing about this cougar was that it had shampoo in its fur and smelled like perfume. Doodle had to do something! So he got out his dental scooter and gave the cougar a toothache! Once the cougar felt that, it ran away forever. The chickens were so happy that The Beauty gave Doodle a dental award on Tuesday. The End
Fred Had a Toothache
ReplyDeleteBy: Olivia
Once there was a cougar named Fred. He tried to put shampoo on his toothache to get it to go away. It did not work. He liked to scooter, but today he did not want to because of his toothache.
The cougar saw a noodle, but he was confused because it was in a tree! It was very useful because he was very hungry. When he turned the corner he saw a balloon with a cartoon face on it. The cougar got very mad because his toothache still did not go away. So, he grabbed the cartoon balloon. He got the noodle, he stuck it in his mouth, it covered his tooth, and his toothache went away.
The Creative Audition
ReplyDeleteBy Emma
There once was a school play, and the auditions started tomorrow so Chloe wanted to get practicing. The reason she practiced so much is because the theater was entrancing to her. But her friends had another story about the theater, they said “Ever since Chloe got into theater she has been so engaged she has been choosing theater over us.” So Chloe promised her friends she’d never forsake them even if she got the part. After that Chloe’s friends helped her create an amazing performance. Then Chloe’s friends tried out for the three person part, where a trio sings the background noises. Then theater became foremost to all of them, and they all got the part. The End
A Traditional Trio Audition
ReplyDeleteBy Julia
One day there was a trio of traditional auditioners. Their names were Lilo, Loli, and Lio. They were hoping that the judge wouldn’t forsake them and that she would be engaged and entranced. It was essential that they elevated their feet before they auditioned. Once they got there the judge recognized their performing and said that they would have to eliminate them from the stage. They were so sentimental they decided to create a dance group, so they could go on tour. The source was Quebec City, Canada.
The Trio Tournament
ReplyDeleteBy Joe
Once upon a time in a city called Trio town with an elevation of 13,000 centimeters. It was meant to be recognized by trios from around the world. The mayor wanted to create a traditional tournament for only trios. At the audition the judges were entranced by all the foremost trios. There were pig trios, Duck trios, even half fish half horse trios! The first trio was Hannah California, Demi Covato and Selena Shomez, who were in the middle of their very “essential” tour. They were so bad, they were forsaken!
The Horse That Enjoyed Studies
ReplyDeleteBy Kassie Williams
There was a horse that studied. She stays in her barn half the time and they come hurrying to her. She sometimes goes to the studying hall. Her baby carries the bread for the studying hall. Replying to the studying teacher. Copying reports she did at the studying place. That is in copied Hinesburg. She said, “Where are the copied papers?” The teacher said “they’re in the copying room next to the copying machine.” There are 280,000,000,000 copies. Can you get them? I found them. They were on the floor!
The end
The Crying Baby
ReplyDeleteBy Jaden
There is a baby. He cries like every day. He has to sit in his crib with his brother. He enjoys having his brother in his crib.Then he jumps over his crib rail and hurries down stairs to his mom. "Do not put me back in my crib Mommy!"
"Oh nah." she says.
"Hey put me down!", he says as she carries me up stairs.
"There you go."
"Waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"
"Bye." Slam!!!!!!
"Darnit!"
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ReplyDeleteDavid Jones and The Evil Cattle Couple
ReplyDeleteBy Mark
One day in April there was a boy. His name was um… well no one knows what his name so let’s just call him that boy. Okay so one day that boy heard that some ghost pirates were trying to become human again. Their leaders name is David Jones and his men were called The Evil Cattle Couple. So that boy knew he had to stop them.
So that boy went to the local pirate saddle and tried to open the door… but it wouldn’t budge he kept trying. Then he noticed two pirates and asked them what the password was. One of them said angle and the other said angel. That boy said to the pencil fossil angle angel. The door flew wide open. He went in and found a total of eleventy-seven metal swords pointing at him. Argh. State your business said a pirate. That boy said that he needed to get information about David Jones. The pirate said he would help him if he drank more root beer then him. The pirate said the rules from a novel. There are several things on each level blah blah blah. LETS JUST GET STARTED!!!
Several hours later... YES!! Yelled that boy I won. Okay here's your information ye land lubber. David Jones got cursed because he took a jewel from a cursed island. And got turned into a skeleton so did his men. And the only way to become human again is to plant the jewel he took and water it with root beer. He has to do it at a special place at night. Because part of the curse is he cant move at day time. Also your friend that other boy took the jewel from David Jones with my help so David Jones is after that other boy. I learnd most of this from a model of David Jones final journal that I got from selling a vowel towel that was very fragile.
TO BE CONTINUED... AND I MEAN IT.
The Extreme Sweater
ReplyDeleteOne day my grandmother got out a needle and some leather and she made a sweater. I was very healthy at that time. I was a big reader. My parents will give me a sweet 16 when I am fifteen, right now I am thirteen and I am very eastern. This sweater was very heavy. It had no need for summer or winter. My grandmother succeeded making the sweater. She got it done three days before my fourteenth birthday. She put it in the washer and it increased in size. It was very pleasant. She found a very steady feather and put it somewhere in the sweater. The meaning of this sweater is for people to have freedom. Now that I have told you the story I will indeed compete the sweater and I will repeat it over and over.
Chris the Rabbit
ReplyDeleteBy Davis
If you do not like weird things, forsake this story immediately because this story was published by the MBSPC, AKA Marks Brain Society Publishing Corporation. Also you might here some interruptions that will be me creating and eliminating parts of the story.
Once there was a land called the Fun world, and that’s where Chris lived. And he got engaged to do cleaning at the valley house, his favorite restaurant in the whole
“Hold up!" "You think I’m just going to tell you the cute and cuddly version, well then you’ve lost your mind!" Because if you know me I prefer vicious over cute. So where was I? Oh right his favorite restaurant in the whole essential universe, AKA Joe’s head just joking. "Wait what happens next well please stop talking and I’ll finish the story!"
Now Chris the rabbit has sentimental feelings for the blanket his dad gave him for his first birthday. "I here Talking!!!!!! Are you getting bored is that the reason!!" Well Chris's family had a tradition of making quilts for each other. So Chris made a huge quilt for his dad.
THE END
Will be continued... maybe... Okay not really...